Increasing the pi (not finished)

Write formally and academically in staunch opposition to normally held views

  In status quo, most of the people agree on increasing the amount of students that each universities should accept. The number of students who apply for colleges is continuously increasing and universities should adjust to that tempo. However, I am firmly against it. Rather than increasing the pi of students, maintaining the current situation and forming an atmosphere that accepts students who didn't attend university would be much more important. 

  True, many people wants to attend to their dream university.

  However, the high ratio of university students has made the diplomas irrelevant and even cliched. When searching for employment, a far better alternative would be to create specialized high to let students to focus and find their true talent and potentials.

  The reason why students way to attend dream universities like Stanford or Yale is that they believe such dream universities will discover their future. Those students have no any concrete plan for their future, but they only have ambitions to success in the society without any dream, more than millions of students are competing each other to attend prestigious universities.

  So how can we solve this diplomas? The answer is simple. Move all students to discover their talents before they graduates high schools. Whatever they suceed to find their future career with coincidence in high school, they can purchase exact college that they need to ate attend, and there won't be meaningless competitions for T.O.

  There is a similar policy implement in Korea, to middle school first-graders. They have a semesters with no exams, only assignments, Instead of a typical class where teacher writes on the board and students scribble on their books, this policy aims to make a class where students tell their peers about their own dreams and have time to search more about their dream careers. Called '자유학기제', meaning giving abundant time fore students to think about their future dreams, this policy has both benefits and drawbacks. Although students can relieve their burden in studying for exams and have time to do something else, this policy may give more burden in the long run after the semester passes. 

  However, this policy gives time to students to search suitable dream. 

  Moreover, the overall benefits at this policy outweighs its pitfalls.